The Rom-Commers

Center (The Bright Side of Disaster) botches a clever premise about an aspiring writer too trapped by family obligations to have a career and an established writer too trapped by his career to have a family. Emma Wheeler put her Hollywood dreams on hold to be a full-time caretaker to her father, but when her manager, whom she shares with “screenwriter’s screenwriter” Charlie Yates, suggests Emma become Charlie’s live-in ghostwriter to fix his appalling rom-com script, Emma gets a second chance at the career she always wanted. Unfortunately, Center has Emma rhapsodically explain rom-com tropes but doesn’t deploy them effectively herself. The meet-cute is more of a meet-ugly, with Charlie calling Emma an “unproduced, underachieving, failed nobody writer off the internet.” This would be fine if Charlie underwent the necessary character arc to become a worthy hero, but instead he’s shoved through the standard beats of a romance novel before he’s developed at all, making scenes like the one in which he carries a fainting Emma bridal-style into his home feel forced, rushed, and out of character. It doesn’t help that Emma is incapable of taking no for an answer, especially when it comes to physical intimacy and Charlie’s reasonable concerns about consent. Additionally, Emma’s boundary-smashing, superfan approach to everyone she meets in L.A. veers from rom-com heroine awkwardness into cringeworthy nonprofessionalism that makes it tough to root for her. Readers will be better served elsewhere. Agent: Helen Breitwieser, Cornerstone Literary. (June)